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gray muzzle
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 12:32 am
by jota
he's going gray and white
on the underside of his snout
this mad mutt of mine
three dogs long
and a half dog tall
he's going gray and white
still he laughs
big head out the window
grinning mutt
tongue hanging out
sniffing the wind
what the hell does he smell?
him and his giant snout
filled with crocodile teeth
he's going gray and white
maybe a year from now
all white
I hope he's still around
this mutt of mine
he's the only dog I ever had
that laughed with his eyes
like he secretly could fly
around the room
with those long soft ears of his
so long as nobody else was around
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 12:37 am
by Lightning Rod
jota,
you are such a fine fucking poet
my tongue is hanging out
and my eyes are laughing
my gimmick
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 12:41 am
by jota
thx LTR
I finally figured out how to navigate around this place.
St8
my new HOME!
ps...pls don't say anything but secretly I think ltkcks has been deveined and deboned, drained of life
thank glad this place is ALIVE
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 1:03 am
by sooZen
ahhh buddy, so nice to see you. I'm sure you're gonna love it here, we Lee's sure do.
Love doggies too. Sounds like you have one of the 'GREATS'!
Smacks and hello to Mermer.
SooZ
wanna hear somethin weird?
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 1:08 am
by jota
that little boy Jayden Underwood
was my third cousin
the little boy, who was murdered last week
smacks to you and Nate and Mr. Cecil Lee
life is the NOW
good to hear from you, my good ole phar Lepht friends
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 1:14 am
by sooZen
My condolences dear Jay...you are right, NOW is the only time.
Peace,
SooZ
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 8:28 am
by WIREMAN
surprise, surprise
the eyes of the
dog do hypnotze
and it is more than
a dream, the thoughts
we glean from our best
friends....................
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 8:35 am
by Dave The Dov
My condolences go out to you as well.
_________________
goverment grants
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 9:34 am
by bennie
hello jota
i liked your poem. i really should write a poem about my dog. but he's such a cheeky toddler of a dog he'd take the poem from my hand, rip it on the floor and laugh with his eyes so I'd have to start again.
jota
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 12:37 pm
by judih
a dog flies around the room
while pretending to be earthbound
we who always fly, let our tail take off
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 1:12 pm
by Arcadia
what the hell does he smell?
I like this line.
Posted: February 27th, 2005, 2:37 pm
by hester_prynne
Mr Jota!
Hey man, I dig tha crazy, smilin, flyin dog!
(Not to mention seeing your sterling words!)
H
Posted: February 28th, 2005, 10:36 am
by mtmynd
Welcome, again. I hope you're more comfortable this time around.
dog days
dog ways
dog says -
"life is as good
as my master"
Posted: February 28th, 2005, 12:13 pm
by mousey1
What a lovely, sweet, happy, funny, bittersweet poem.
I love dogs. I have two.
I really enjoyed this read...
those gray muzzles, those loving eyes
they'll get you every time.
Nice to meet you.
"three dogs long
and a half dog tall"