when i was you
you were me
we
touched each others souls
long enough to become
something else more fluid
less contained within
us at the seams
busting loose water flooded our streets
swimming to higher ground
leaving each other
to drown
that last look of 'evey man for himself'
love trembling lips
when we were we
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when we were we
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: when we were we
There is a very good progression in this poem reaching the unforseen end.
Re: when we were we
very nice C-Soul.....the esoteric beauty of being there
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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