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deep within the bliss of amnesia

Posted: March 16th, 2013, 9:56 pm
by saw
I'd be happy to lie on the rooftop
contemplating the merits of apathy
vis a vis the pain of awareness
for hours on end, staring down the night
to see who blinked first

I'd be happy swimming with the starfish
tossed back and forth like a beach ball
by my adopted family of dolphins,
the torpedoes of never-ending war
a long forgotten recollection

Hell, i'd be happy forgetting who I am tonight
left only with my childish dreams
that still might come true,
I'd be happy tonight to demonstrate to you
some of my non-verbal communication

Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Posted: March 17th, 2013, 4:46 pm
by dadio
Enjoyable poem. 8)

Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Posted: March 18th, 2013, 10:40 am
by stilltrucking
your poem is so cool 8)
it made me happy to read it :D

thank you

Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Posted: March 18th, 2013, 11:59 am
by creativesoul
sometimes the quiet helps demonstrate the secrets of our souls :D NICE-------WRITE SUGAR :oops: