The Age of Anxiety

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The Age of Anxiety

Post by e_dog » March 1st, 2005, 3:24 am

I.

the anxiety of age

in the age of anxiety

it pulls the brain
with a cat's claws
slower than usual
and never without fur

you drank a gallon
of espresso
before turning to bed
it was actually gasoline
poured on the fire

the despair of unpairing
the demise of surprise
the challenge of weather

whether you go
or come
i will be waiting in pain
only gasoline will put out
the flame
only water will burn

the age of anxiety

anxiety of age

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Post by e_dog » March 1st, 2005, 3:39 am

II.

What is the sound
of the answer
to God's great
interrogation?

a scream of rage
heard by no one

the inaudible vibration
of a tear landing
on a cheek

a thought racing
past the finish line
after all the competitors
have quit

a dream
trapped inside
a body prison

the words i could have
said
long ago

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Post by e_dog » March 1st, 2005, 3:42 am

III.

Alone.

and then Not.

Alone and then
Not.

A loan. A knot.
A lone knot. A
loan. Not.

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Post by judih » March 1st, 2005, 8:55 am

i heard it through the grapevine
i was slick
and now i'm knot

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » March 1st, 2005, 6:04 pm

Jesus Christ Edog!

I could read these all night...fact I wish I had read them last night....
s'like you was lookin thru my window or sumpin....heh....

more! more!
and
Thanks!

H 8)

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Post by mousey1 » March 1st, 2005, 11:50 pm

Superbly terriffic edog. This is beautifully written.

Many thanks.

You captured the pulse there, no doubt about it.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by e_dog » March 3rd, 2005, 7:26 pm

IV.

one side of the card
reads
Do Not Disturb
the other
says
Housekeeping Please.

he hung it
from his big toe
and lay on the bed.

looking toward his feet
there was the plea
for cleaning.
looking past it
in the mirror facing the bed
was a disturbed
backwards message.

this is the sign
that signifies the soul.

(hotel theology)

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Post by mousey1 » March 4th, 2005, 11:20 pm

hotel theology hunh?

You made me chuckleth.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by e_dog » March 7th, 2005, 3:29 am

V.

California
is a cultural cesspool

two score
years ago
there was a festival

now
the drain
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by mousey1 » March 7th, 2005, 3:43 pm

e dog u dog

interesting installments

I'll stick with

While I may have lost the train

I am intrigued

Perhaps I was never on the train

The beauty of poetry
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by e_dog » March 8th, 2005, 4:45 am

From the great hall of Neptune
you can watch Alcatraz
with the sun setting beside the Golden Gate Bridge
as you eat overpriced seafood
and drink overpriced wine
while outside a man
silently shakes a cup at tourists for coins
and drags around a ragged blanket
in the harsh Bay wind.

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Post by mousey1 » March 12th, 2005, 12:04 pm

Poignantly put.

How's Arnie doing by the way?(....she facetiously asks....)
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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