cosmic evaluation

[saw]

I ain't no doctor madam
but I do have an advanced degree
in suspicious behavior,
so I'm certainly not saying you are wrong

about me, all I can tell you
is I'm doing the best I can

Now of course that's a position
that invites ample scrutiny
so I don't really have a problem
with your interpretation

'cept
you could be wrong

both of us could be wrong,
or one of us could be wrong
and if you get right down to it madam,
we could both be right

well my friend......
that about covers it

[creativesoul]

liking this- kind of new orleans flavor- before the hurricane

[dadio]

Oh, yes, very good.

[Arcadia]

first time I read it, I read "cosmetic" instead of "cosmic" ... not a good momento for reading comprehension, I guess ... gracias for sharing it!

[Michael]

I finally decide to visit this fine place and who has the first poem? Amazing.

Nice use of symbolism and irony in this piece, mi amiga. The words that utilize those poetic media: “degree”, “position”, “covers”. Very nicely applied.

CKA
Michael

OK, saw, everything I wrote about the great use of symbolism and irony still stands for this piece. However, you are probably not "mi amiga". You may not even be of the female persuasion. I saw Arcadia's name and thought that she wrote the poem. Sorry 'bout that.

Still a good piece.

[creativesoul]

loved this- sweet adventure into your world