The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

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The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by goldenmyst » May 26th, 2013, 9:10 pm

The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Honey hair haloed in flaxen sheen
Her eyes gleam with glint of soul transfusion
And feed into my hungry Chakra galaxy
Each node of her path to heaven
Pulses into my sensory web
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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by mnaz » May 27th, 2013, 11:01 pm

the eyes are indeed a window ..
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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by goldenmyst » May 27th, 2013, 11:38 pm

Love your comment my friend. Thanks for reading.

John
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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by dadio » June 21st, 2013, 2:37 am

Well captured. 8)
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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by goldenmyst » June 21st, 2013, 7:50 am

Thanks Dadio. Glad you enjoyed. :)

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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by Steve Plonk » June 21st, 2013, 10:31 pm

Great short verse. 8) Pleased that you have returned to post here at Studio 8. :)
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Re: The Girl with the Flaxen Hair

Post by goldenmyst » June 21st, 2013, 10:37 pm

Thanks Steve. I'm glad to be back. :)
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