Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

You twist a half inch
of lipstick
from its housing,
but I see a dogs cock
emerging from its furry pouch
that you put to your lying bitch
mouth

and if I could borrow
Francis Dolarhyde's
killing teeth
you would be my Freddy Lounds.

very nice work!
on a personal subjective kind of level
I used to post to Litkicks, I posted some gory haikus about ripping peoples throats out with my teeth.
I think I used to have about seven or eight user names over-there. All of them got deleted sooner or later. They told me I needed professional help. and i agreed my writing could use some help from a professional editor
pardon the ramble
I have mellowed these days now that I am a toothless tiger.

Ah, yes, worthy work, love it.

Zero-Hero, thanks for your post, brilliant...D

Dadio, always a pleasure......D

lost in names but auch moment kind of word feeling, david! Gracias for sharing it!

lessons in dog eat dog=- 'always liked the term 'lying bitch as it has no gender really- or= is it just that i have rubbed both sides of that coin? dunno- nice write-like afternoon cafe

Arcadia, thank you for your thoughts, I knew the names would not come readily to mind for some readers, they are characters from the film "Manhunter" from 1986....David

Creativesoul, thank you for your read and post......David

seemingly poetic though ...
more in the referencing

of ... scatology

hahaha, yeah you could say that, seeya....D