shoot the devil

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mnaz
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shoot the devil

Post by mnaz » July 1st, 2013, 2:15 pm

grab yer guns
when they come over the wall
you could shoot the devil with a gun
so many guns, they shoot themselves
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Re: shoot the devil

Post by dadio » July 4th, 2013, 2:31 am

Indeed.Good. 8)
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Re: shoot the devil

Post by Steve Plonk » July 7th, 2013, 1:55 pm

Dark short poem...This is what I'd call a "penny haiku". 8)
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Re: shoot the devil

Post by mnaz » July 12th, 2013, 12:30 pm

not as well written as it could be, but not bad.

your basic rumination of the limitations of guns--- more and ever more of them-- to solve our "existential crises," as it were ...

gracias.
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