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shoot the devil
Posted: July 1st, 2013, 2:15 pm
by mnaz
grab yer guns
when they come over the wall
you could shoot the devil with a gun
so many guns, they shoot themselves
Re: shoot the devil
Posted: July 4th, 2013, 2:31 am
by dadio
Indeed.Good.
Re: shoot the devil
Posted: July 7th, 2013, 1:55 pm
by Steve Plonk
Dark short poem...This is what I'd call a "penny haiku".
Re: shoot the devil
Posted: July 12th, 2013, 12:30 pm
by mnaz
not as well written as it could be, but not bad.
your basic rumination of the limitations of guns--- more and ever more of them-- to solve our "existential crises," as it were ...
gracias.