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trampled earth

Posted: July 6th, 2013, 9:48 am
by saw
drizzle taps out a morning love song
watery morse code to those able to breathe,
indecipherable to corporations
that claim to be people

to entities that only speak Dividend,
I despise that language, it has these
raspy overtones that grate my nerves
like ancient rock hard romano

it irks me.....Shut Up !
open your freakin eyes !
hug a tree you fool
before it's too late

Sorry about my tone, but
sometimes friends have to tell it like it is
I say this to you because I love this planet
I say this to you because....I love..... you

Re: trampled earth

Posted: July 17th, 2013, 8:20 am
by dadio
So well said.

corporations
that claim to be people

to entities that only speak Dividend,
I despise that language, it has these
raspy overtones that grate my nerves
like ancient rock hard romano

it irks me.....Shut Up !
Done well!! 8)

Re: trampled earth

Posted: July 20th, 2013, 2:16 pm
by Steve Plonk
Hell, yeah! Earth Day is every day! Thanks saw! You buzz cut through the BS on this one. 8)

Re: trampled earth

Posted: August 24th, 2013, 4:42 pm
by mnaz
it's a very prolific, ambitious and logical language that always sounded a bit off to me.

could never quite put my finger on it exactly ... maybe just its general soullessness.

but that's kind of a weak answer ...

Re: trampled earth

Posted: September 2nd, 2013, 11:10 am
by theirishsea
I agree with this poem-----business has destroyed our values----it is time to reassess everything and change this society.