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Moon Child

Posted: July 7th, 2013, 12:10 am
by libramoon
Moon Child

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Created from the Milky Way shining into Mother Moon,
Reflections from that ancient light emerging from her womb.
A sad guitar, a raging sax, emoting through the sea
Of stories sung through ages all, what was through what will be --
Were you the Lady of that lake, were you the piper's reed?
Were you the luscious, sacred fruit fulfilling every need?
Yes, you the child dancing in the fullness of the night
To ring the rune and cast the spell to make the darkness bright.
Of goddess born to keep us safe and sing our lullabies
Till we emerge as sparkling stars to light the dreaming skies.

Re: Moon Child

Posted: July 7th, 2013, 8:40 am
by judih
beautifully lit from all sides

Re: Moon Child

Posted: July 7th, 2013, 9:42 am
by saw
it's not easy to write rhyming poems that don't seemed forced, but this has power and movement,... message.......and perfect meter......nice work

Re: Moon Child

Posted: July 7th, 2013, 9:47 am
by WIREMAN
Real nice rhymescape......

Re: Moon Child

Posted: July 7th, 2013, 1:50 pm
by Steve Plonk
Great dreamscape... 8)