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it's Friday too
Posted: July 26th, 2013, 11:41 am
by the mingo
this poem is a dog obsessively
licking his paws
on the couch just before noon
the birds outside call out
now & again
it's Friday too
& blue skies
I think I'll curve this whole thing
into an angel's head
& leave it there
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 26th, 2013, 2:49 pm
by constantine
onward to mongolia, where poetry is curved and music is linear!
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 27th, 2013, 12:04 am
by the mingo
Yeah! and all those short Mongolian ponies get to eat bite-sized Hershey Semi-Sweet Chocolate Bars every night before bedding down - Hell yeah, Mongolia!
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 27th, 2013, 7:56 am
by judih
a good friday poem can sometimes apply to saturday
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 27th, 2013, 9:24 am
by the mingo
brought a smile , judih
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 27th, 2013, 9:48 am
by Arcadia
well done, mingo & long live fridays!!!!!!!!!
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 27th, 2013, 5:54 pm
by constantine
the semi-sweets are my favorite too. that the little ponies like them comes to no surprise to one such as i.
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 29th, 2013, 1:09 am
by the mingo
Thx folks
Re: it's Friday too
Posted: July 29th, 2013, 2:28 pm
by dadio
I like how the metaphor worked for you in this fine poem.