Driving home

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Artguy
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Driving home

Post by Artguy » September 15th, 2013, 11:11 am

Driving Home

A transparent moon rising
Perched in cerulean blue above
High to my aching left
Slow through my windshield
Window open wide to September
Summers' back turned
Cool Canadian wind
Whispers on my ragged face
Rusty ol truck
And I too
Together we move along
Beneath the rising day time moon
The crow is happy
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Re: Driving home

Post by revolutionrabbit » September 15th, 2013, 12:56 pm

cool 8)
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Re: Driving home

Post by dadio » September 16th, 2013, 2:18 am

Finely put bang on the nail 8)
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Re: Driving home

Post by saw » September 16th, 2013, 8:58 am

sweet
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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