that morning

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the mingo
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that morning

Post by the mingo » September 22nd, 2013, 8:14 am

the 300th word on the list was name
I wondered to myself is this my house?
I'm sure I was there
I remember how close I was to your eyes
we locked ourselves in there and went exploring
the day was of use
the night too.
every word was new
we made small cones from this language as we went
scattering them on the landscape
you were the wife of the whole place
there were televisions then & in every gun knowledge of the whole
the marriage was our beautiful property
and the hitchhiker late for work we picked up that morning, was thankful
& gave us a free pass for the ride through the gorge
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: that morning

Post by dadio » September 22nd, 2013, 1:53 pm

V. good. 8)

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Re: that morning

Post by the mingo » September 22nd, 2013, 3:00 pm

Thx, Terry.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: that morning

Post by SadLuckDame » September 23rd, 2013, 6:34 am

Well, I can't hide that I like this, like it very much. :P
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: that morning

Post by the mingo » September 23rd, 2013, 9:16 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: that morning

Post by sweetwater » September 26th, 2013, 4:21 pm

nice thoughts and memories

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