the very boy ask

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the mingo
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the very boy ask

Post by the mingo » October 4th, 2013, 2:34 am

you are a genius
but i again change
into an away animal
into a house point
into an autumn past midnight
very after things
i have play
and spells
and the letters every mother writes
to the went men
i have shucked meaning
and turn here
a little work gives place
& years & most tell why
the very boy ask
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the very boy ask

Post by judih » October 5th, 2013, 12:33 am

very much like

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Re: the very boy ask

Post by dadio » October 5th, 2013, 4:28 am

That is it. 8)

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Re: the very boy ask

Post by the mingo » October 5th, 2013, 8:25 am

thx judih & Terry 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the very boy ask

Post by stilltrucking » October 6th, 2013, 12:12 pm

boy wonder
wonder boy 8)
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