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saw
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chorus

Post by saw » October 6th, 2013, 12:35 pm

guess i always knew there was a brick wall
there inside the catacombs of your secret soul
but I chose to only see the rainforest
growing in the foreground

but as the agents orange, black and blue
killed back the vegetation, each brick
began to smirk and stare at me as if to say
we were always here fool

you knew it,
beyond the exotic jungle
we always lurked, locked stoically in our mortar
don't blame us, it's not our fault
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: chorus

Post by dadio » October 9th, 2013, 2:35 am

Deep poem yet so imaginatively done.

saw
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Re: chorus

Post by saw » October 12th, 2013, 9:49 am

thanx dadio my friend...appreciate the feedback
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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