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chorus

Posted: October 6th, 2013, 12:35 pm
by saw
guess i always knew there was a brick wall
there inside the catacombs of your secret soul
but I chose to only see the rainforest
growing in the foreground

but as the agents orange, black and blue
killed back the vegetation, each brick
began to smirk and stare at me as if to say
we were always here fool

you knew it,
beyond the exotic jungle
we always lurked, locked stoically in our mortar
don't blame us, it's not our fault

Re: chorus

Posted: October 9th, 2013, 2:35 am
by dadio
Deep poem yet so imaginatively done.

Re: chorus

Posted: October 12th, 2013, 9:49 am
by saw
thanx dadio my friend...appreciate the feedback