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Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Posted: October 6th, 2013, 6:56 pm
by mtmynd
Bang Bang ~ you're Full

stretched out
over words
scraping
ideas deep
into flesh
that begs
for touch
the sonnet
was useless
in times
like this

full moons
deserved
so much
better
than the
remnants
offered
thru the
pigeons
delicate coo

_________

Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Posted: October 7th, 2013, 2:49 am
by dadio
Bang on. Fine poem.

Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Posted: October 7th, 2013, 10:40 am
by the mingo
8) yeah - & Mongolia too

Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Posted: October 7th, 2013, 10:47 am
by tarbaby
that's the skinny :D

Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Posted: October 9th, 2013, 2:14 am
by mtmynd
gracias, gentlemen, for the kind words! ;)