say no to it

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the mingo
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say no to it

Post by the mingo » October 12th, 2013, 9:45 am

man I'm no longer sure
all my life WAS my life
not even sure all them blues
WAS blues
not sure all the times
I pretended it was a joke
WAS even a pretending
maybe I WAS just in a mood
I look back on all the WAS
can't say it matters
can't say it don't
sometimes I belonged
sometimes I was just gone & gone
all I know is
what's coming
keeps coming
& can't no one
say no to it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

saw
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Re: say no to it

Post by saw » October 12th, 2013, 9:52 am

nicely expressed, the train keeps on rollin'....don't always know where it's goin'
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

creativesoul
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Re: say no to it

Post by creativesoul » October 12th, 2013, 1:15 pm

nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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