Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

you
her shining knight.

knight shining her

sight of the slope
and down the square

you watched the rain
from the balony on the stairs

Now this is good. Sensible use of one arrangement of words of a poem to make another.

there is some sabotage going on

which i have tried to address

people love to start fights and create problems
and not solutions

i enjoy reading your work

You have a keen mind, an intellectial touch in your work.