THEIR NAKEDNESS SEE,

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dadio
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THEIR NAKEDNESS SEE,

Post by dadio » October 23rd, 2013, 3:54 am

He always thought
hers was a peasant's body
not as a critique
but by something

about the simplicity
of the way she walked
or stood or the way
she lay on the double bed

one hand resting
on her naked abdomen
her brown haired head
on a pillow at rest

the way one leg
was raised
one flat down
on the bed

the small area
of pubic hairs
he was by the window
of his bedroom

looking at the garden below
then up along the road
the afternoon sun
settling on the trees

aren't you coming
back to bed?
she said
still not satiated ?

he said smiling
sensing his pecker move
not of you
she said

or of Percy
if he's willing
he sniggered
at her nickname

for his pecker
the green bus went by
along the road
good God

he said
that's her bus
whose?
she said

my mother's bus
she’ll be here
in a few minutes
she lay there

open mouthed
uncertain of what
to say or do
you'll have to get up

and we'll go
before she wonders
what we were doing
up here

he said
she moved from the bed
as if in a daze
her nakedness complete

her breasts bobbing
her hands searching
around for her clothes
he moved faster

hurrying his dressing
taking quick glimpses
through the window
his mother was not

in view
he took a glance
at his lover
semi dressed

hair in a mess
her naked buttocks
disappearing
into cloth

he loved that final glimpse
of nakedness
that final sight
of bare flesh

his mother was in sight
along the road
quick
he said

downstairs
and she grabbed
her stockings
and shoes

and followed him
down the stairs
two at a time
her bare feet

sensing the cold floor
through the kitchen
and out the back door
along the brick pathway

he closed the door
and locked
and put the key
back under the mat

and speedily
followed his lover
into the woods
the ground prickling

beneath his feet
and she smiling
out of breath
hiding behind

the old shed
putting on her stockings
and he wondering
how it may have been

if his mother
had caught them
making love
and their nakedness seen.

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Re: THEIR NAKEDNESS SEE,

Post by sweetwater » October 24th, 2013, 3:26 pm

Perhaps surprisingly, given the importance of conformity as a theoretical construct in social psychology and the profound implications of your pecker has in relation to not conforming to social norms ... it pays to write very long and abstruse renditions of clear postulating poems of fine art ... well sometimes not so well defined as the refined gestures of

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Re: THEIR NAKEDNESS SEE,

Post by mtmynd » October 24th, 2013, 3:30 pm

cool imaging, dadio.
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Re: THEIR NAKEDNESS SEE,

Post by dadio » October 25th, 2013, 4:08 am

Thank you, sweetwater &mtmynd

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