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the mingo
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tomorrow

Post by the mingo » November 13th, 2013, 1:28 am

I am sitting
in a corner
of a room
I came here long ago
but should I ever think
I will be here tomorrow?
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: tomorrow

Post by mtmynd » November 13th, 2013, 2:49 am

only think of now for now is forever and beyond tomorrow..
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Re: tomorrow

Post by dadio » November 13th, 2013, 3:42 am

No, never think that way it's too limiting. Fine poem 8)

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Re: tomorrow

Post by constantine » November 13th, 2013, 6:20 pm

muted resignation with bittersweet hope - just like in philistia!

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Re: tomorrow

Post by the mingo » November 14th, 2013, 8:28 am

o man what a gang! You guys keep right on jammin now -
we all will make home sooner or later -
'til then it's french fries or big baked taters 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: tomorrow

Post by judih » November 14th, 2013, 11:36 pm

my room with no corners
mocks my attempt to be square

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Re: tomorrow

Post by the mingo » November 15th, 2013, 12:05 am

8) crack me up judih
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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