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creativesoul
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neck lace

Post by creativesoul » December 10th, 2013, 9:18 pm

that pattern in your throat
shows more when you sing
when the wings of your heart
come unglued
feathers flying around
you in that long leather coat

that lil sad lonely boy look
kind of sent me
big brown eyes

that ring
had to fling the dangers
arts with darts
pool cues and blues

meetings and greetings
endless-talking and listening
then some thing leaves
someone walks over a line
and the other feels the tug
on the rope has to get some dope
cause it hurts so bad
was it you?
the drug not the hug
skin glistening
teasing
never...... pleasing
torture
that broken connection
all that seduction
risk and adrenline
kiss me
im burning up
Last edited by creativesoul on December 11th, 2013, 1:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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the mingo
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Re: neck lace

Post by the mingo » December 11th, 2013, 6:54 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: neck lace

Post by dadio » December 11th, 2013, 12:38 pm

Ah, one of my favourite writers on S8. Excellent.

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Re: neck lace

Post by saw » December 14th, 2013, 3:18 pm

superb
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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