magic turns old farm
into new farm
the current is electric
now- we need these things-
tractor
new lawn mower
ranch hand
leather gloves
shovel
rake
no harm intended
this is for all of us
greenhouse mist
insists
that we grow food
filling with love
the land and hands
full of dirt
broken fingernails
muscles tight
brown in the sun
salads are really
way more fun
it is right
this life of green
old farm
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creativesoul
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: old farm
i like this. its honest simplicity - its warm matter of factness - is perfect for what you convey.
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creativesoul
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Thank you- very kind! Never sure what " the correct response" is...
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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The new girl
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Very good down to earth poem.
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creativesoul
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where did your lil picture go? and how do you do that?thanx 
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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