close one's eyes

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sonofthesun
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close one's eyes

Post by sonofthesun » January 16th, 2014, 3:02 am

She said
she said
I wish it were you
it would be better if it were you
find a cure she said
it's a contagion she said
she said I wish it were you
she said I wish it were you instead
of my best friend
as he had told her
she said
that it was I
that was now what is
killing him
There is no empty space

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dadio
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Re: close one's eyes

Post by dadio » January 19th, 2014, 5:36 am

Classic poem

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Re: close one's eyes

Post by creativesoul » January 19th, 2014, 10:25 am

good fortune is sweet= the luck- to have a friend- and then the love- to let them go
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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