Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

been a whole bunch of gray days in a row
trees look feeble and windswept-
not a second passes without a remote and distant
call of the heart torn and frayed
lost in the sway of a bigger sea
it untangles the webs
that spiders wove
spun in love
dewdrops glistening in the light
hold on for dear life

I liked your poem & theme.

I liked it too, one of your best short poems i think, but what do I know about poetry

thank you- i do not pretend to know poetry- but it has saved me from an alcoholic death

poetry saves me from myself


Thank you for writing

Oh it is snowing-let it snow- most exciting thing since white sliced bread in oregon
I wanted
Him the other night
I am sure
Had he been here
There would have been a terrible fight
did not really want me at all
How really he didn't think i loved him right
Let the snow make his heart and skin
all tight
Feel everything
I felt
while he took me down
Poetry vaguely revokes
Bad patents
Inventions
Of people damaged by experiences
Broken and sad
Kindness is not weakness

curry 123- thanks- although poetry for me- is a vague way of 'just sayin' i prefer short stories- but again - thanks- new member aye?