o green earth

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sonofthesun
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o green earth

Post by sonofthesun » February 16th, 2014, 4:21 am

Born and raised
sun rays shining
mother chose me
as did father
I was lucky
i had want of nothing important
as many others cry impotent
upon a family decided upon their birth

we are all related
why fret over semantics
my mother and father raised me
I am thankful
let jesus not cry for me
my blood has not been shed in vain
my definition may be as a bastard
but my thoughts are not
our family true is all open arms
There is no empty space

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dadio
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Re: o green earth

Post by dadio » February 16th, 2014, 4:49 am

Good so good poem.

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Re: o green earth

Post by creativesoul » February 18th, 2014, 12:51 pm

the stars form constellations and move around in a small romantic dance- as do your cells and light in the eyes-alas- life is all with in there - like a bear= DYING to get out-and rub elbows with some of the love in this world- :arrow:
interesting poem-
all inter-related- yes- the natives say ' all our relations mitakye oyasin'-
or aloha
or shaloam
i say that family is like swiss cheese and shit happens-
but who loves me?
my family-
but the extended family is where i get it on the learning curve
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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