MONDAY MORNING HEAD.

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dadio
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MONDAY MORNING HEAD.

Post by dadio » March 14th, 2014, 3:59 pm

Baruch liked
Yehudit's eyes
the smile that lingered
waiting for her

seemed an eternity
being with her
always seemed
too short a time

the walk
by the wood shed
the memory
of their first

smoke there
she almost choking
that first time
the path

through the woods
the trees tall
sky above
hardly seen

she by a tree
that time waiting
said she wanted to
but they didn't

not just yet
he said
the walk to the pond
warm weather

unlike that first time
when the frost
bit them
he waited

by the pond side
ducks swimming
disturbing
the water's skin

she lay once
beside him here
talked of sex
or what

she knew of it
what girls
at school said
what one girl

said it was like
he watched the ducks
smelt the weather's air
that first kiss

kisses followed
she and him
the moon shining
above them

he liked the way
she lay
on that bed
the sunlight

through the window
falling
on her breasts
he watched the sky

through
the tall trees
clouds passing
he liked her hand

in his
warm pulsing
fingers touching
undoing

doing
waiting seemed
an eternity
he often said

playing out
the last kiss
inside
his morning time head.
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Re: MONDAY MORNING HEAD.

Post by silent woman » March 15th, 2014, 3:41 pm

first love, true love 8)


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If you can't give me love and peace, Then give me bitter fame. — Akhmatova.

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Re: MONDAY MORNING HEAD.

Post by dadio » March 15th, 2014, 5:05 pm

Thank you, silent woman.

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