pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

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mtmynd
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pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by mtmynd » March 15th, 2014, 4:40 pm

\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
* * * * * * *
sociopathic butterfly
unable to cope with
its metamorphosis
whispers to the flower
'your petals don't fly'

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Re: pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by dadio » March 20th, 2014, 12:05 pm

Neat poem. 8)

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Re: pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by stilltrucking » March 28th, 2014, 2:09 pm

petal envy

cool poem
Freud would have loved it

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Re: pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by Artguy » March 28th, 2014, 3:16 pm

Does the sociopathic butterfly scream???

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Re: pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by mtmynd » March 28th, 2014, 4:22 pm

Artguy wrote:Does the sociopathic butterfly scream???
just a soft, fluttering whisper the last time i heard...
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Re: pass the celluloid, vision is distorted

Post by mtmynd » April 10th, 2014, 9:26 am

lerbon123 wrote:Freud would have loved it.
maybe a Freudian or two may enjoy this, eh? you know any that maybe interested? ;)
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