Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

when I left
the lions were still in the woods
& the birds yet in the trees
when I came back
the lions had turned to stone
& cast stone shadows
the birds had also stopped moving
some in the trees
others in midair
it was that way for the longest time
then you died
that was when the birds everywhere
completely disappeared

stoned

I almost forgot about the time I turned to marble
I would hardly notice that I am a thing called alive
if not for pure poetry
thank you

when the birds disappear it's a sign to seek them out. life is dismal without them.

excellent imaginative piece, el mingo... put it on the biggest billboard in the state.

it seems presumptions to me, for me to comment on a poem

but if I was a poet I would
probably quote dadio
and say
"good capture"

beautifully put, the mingo

outer slams inner in the face
gotta shake the perception

Jack - thank you for both

Cecil - if I followed your kind suggestion & put that on a billboard here in the great state of Yew Nork the rent would cost me (plus TAX) more than I'll ever be worth - thx

judih - Thx -

el mingo: "if I followed your kind suggestion & put that on a billboard here..."

on the bottom left corner, in contrasting colors, the following -
You'll make enough to pay your taxes and buy a new pair of shoes when the media finds you and asks for an interview... and those fans! whoa... the big payoff, amigo. We'll see you on CBS Sunday Morning having a conversation with Morley Safer. I can't wait... and neither should you!

Enjoyable reading

Thx Cec - I could use the cash but the rest of it would ruin the time I have carved out for riding my bike

Thx Atehequa -

the mingo wrote:Thx Cec - I could use the cash but the rest of it would ruin the time I have carved out for riding my bike

Well then, el mingo, if that's the case. I fully understand! we could all use cash around here but we also value our independence more than dinero. I certainly do.

Hey, I had a good time playing around with ya' amigo... because i got time. no money but time up the kazoo!

i'll be lookin' out for some more of your writes.