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creativesoul
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no juice

Post by creativesoul » May 17th, 2014, 11:26 pm

maybe the things
that i loved the most
gave my heart and soul
just havent got no juice
for it anymore

but i loved him

going to austrailia
maybe matey
i will find that longed for love
i wanted so badly


it wasnt my fault
that you didnt know
the secrets of loving a real woman
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: no juice

Post by dadio » May 28th, 2014, 3:13 pm

8) Fine work.

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Re: no juice

Post by saw » May 29th, 2014, 2:09 pm

so much locked up inside the human mind
cant always read a book by its cover
and even when we read the book
our interpretations are not the same .... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: no juice

Post by creativesoul » May 29th, 2014, 10:15 pm

Xxxx
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: no juice

Post by justwalt » June 1st, 2014, 2:14 am

I'm not so sure... men... call it love

I call it... lucky

tks

w
many is a word

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Re: no juice

Post by WIREMAN » June 1st, 2014, 11:56 am

There comes a time when the spirit asks, " why even try?"
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: no juice

Post by creativesoul » June 15th, 2014, 3:55 am

Could be the intigue 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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