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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » May 21st, 2014, 2:05 am

she came in the room
dress torn and frayed
laughing like a hyena

she had the blues


she was slurring her words
blowing bubbles
she was lost
again
she came towards the edge
looked over
walked away
turned around
ran
and she looked over the edge and smiled and she flew =
down to the ocean below
so blue
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Post by dadio » May 21st, 2014, 3:24 pm

Keen eyed poem. Tragic or no? good work.

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Post by sweetwater » May 25th, 2014, 7:49 am

Good stuff

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