status of recovery

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sweetwater
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status of recovery

Post by sweetwater » May 21st, 2014, 5:19 pm

can you ever find
yourself in the moving flow
or is the movement

experience of
the moment of time itself
a realization

you are forever
as unknowable and the
undefinable

spaces that collect
In the imaginative
moment of movement

david
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Re: status of recovery

Post by david » May 22nd, 2014, 12:15 pm

Makes me think, and I like that, I have been Practising "mindfulness" so your poem comes across....D

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Re: status of recovery

Post by creativesoul » May 24th, 2014, 9:40 pm

nice- i feel like i am in a lil garden with the sound of water-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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