mensa mouse club

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saw
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mensa mouse club

Post by saw » May 29th, 2014, 2:22 pm

this mouse in my kitchen
evolving quicker than I am,
they tell you you can't build a better mousetrap

that its simplicity is botticellian
yet this mouse will have none of that shit
he eats everything in my pantry

that hasn't been stored in a strongbox
guarded by an electric fence
with razor wire on top

this gray little einstein
eschews the delicious peanut butter
I have generously left for him

albeit on a spring-loaded dinner table
a bountiful portion,I tell you
this rodent is breathing rarefied air

no matter how I tempt him
he fully understands the dangers
of trusting men
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: mensa mouse club

Post by dadio » May 31st, 2014, 2:59 am

I had them too. Wiped them out. Took ages. Fine poem.

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justwalt
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Re: mensa mouse club

Post by justwalt » June 1st, 2014, 2:06 am

fun story...
let me tell you about 23 flying squirrels... in the house... one day

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many is a word

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one of those jerks
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Re: mensa mouse club

Post by one of those jerks » June 10th, 2014, 6:54 pm

8)

thank you for the good poetry
She is twice the man I am.

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