smell of sickness

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creativesoul
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smell of sickness

Post by creativesoul » June 4th, 2014, 3:11 pm

when i smell that smell
i know
long before
they do
i cannot describe it

nurses say that it is a gift

it feels like the post office
the dead letters dept
40 years later getting one in the mail
except not
because the person is alive
standing next to me
yammering about ailments
what they take for it
what they can an cannot do
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when i am painting =i feel people =that i have known=
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: smell of sickness

Post by dadio » June 6th, 2014, 1:42 am

Good take on a theme. 8)

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