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manifesto
Posted: March 12th, 2005, 2:02 pm
by 4°
configured
facade
and the path of
least resistance
my insistance
to house you
in my pith
capricious myth
i
regret
nothing
as i bask in
the glow of a
faraway son
Posted: March 12th, 2005, 3:20 pm
by hester_prynne
Capricious myth, unhand my pith!
Who says so?
Womanifesto!
A snippet from an epic.
Nicely done,
H
Posted: March 12th, 2005, 3:30 pm
by judih
humanifesto
complex
inclusive creatures
love bonds us all
Posted: March 12th, 2005, 5:10 pm
by 4°
yes. so thankful.
Posted: March 13th, 2005, 9:26 am
by bennie
Great rythmn in this poem.
You know, I've stopped checking the spelling of that word now. I've gotten past caring.
Rithim
rythmn
rhythmn
rhythm
Ridim
yes yes. ridim. this is the ridim I like.
and rhyme too. Ryhme rime rhyhewoqlme.
too hard.
I used to get confused about quite quiet now it's rhythmn and rhyme.
Bloody words man!
The sooner Newspeak kicks in the better.
I liked your poem though.
Posted: March 13th, 2005, 5:58 pm
by 4°
thanks bennie.
Posted: March 13th, 2005, 9:18 pm
by mtmynd
nicely done, 4d... a special flow to that, indeed!
Posted: March 14th, 2005, 10:51 pm
by 4°
thank you, c. it don't happen so often anymore, but when it does it means more.
Posted: March 14th, 2005, 11:10 pm
by Lightning Rod
Demand a festival
I can't manage my festo
and my fresco flakes off the walls
like a Michaelangelo rebar fiesta