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from the sadows

Posted: June 10th, 2014, 11:12 am
by creativesoul
i am watching
see you from above
the love you tried to make
your own
life doesnt
do what i want
touch me
sizzle
fire wont go out
sizzle
into the dark
the sparks
seem to smile
laughing
what i thought
what you thought
ha ha ha ha ah sought after all the wrong things
love cannt be told what to do
sorry if that makes you blue

the nicotine has been transdermally interjected into lungs that breathe
my air
trees talk to me
the squirrel that hides dog food
in the woods
pisses inthe laundry room
i ptotect it from the dogs
the chocloate dinosaur that breathes hard
when i eat
anything= plant the garden....water the weed

Re: from the sadows

Posted: June 12th, 2014, 12:44 pm
by Steve Plonk
Creative Soul, Keep those remembrances flowing. Loved this poem.
It seems to recreate an "astral experience" of lovemaking...that is, an out of body experience... :!: :idea: 8)

Re: from the sadows

Posted: June 12th, 2014, 3:34 pm
by creativesoul
Thank u

Re: from the sadows

Posted: June 12th, 2014, 4:01 pm
by creativesoul
I wonder
At the love I made
The love I took
The resistance
To stay
He likes me
But I want to go away

Re: from the sadows

Posted: June 13th, 2014, 1:11 am
by dadio
Lovely work. Good theme.

Re: from the sadows

Posted: June 14th, 2014, 5:44 pm
by creativesoul
thankful
that when i have cut off

all the threads to society

you all
somehow
you reel me in

peace