mikros kosmos

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mikros kosmos

Post by justwalt » June 22nd, 2014, 4:27 pm

(to myself)

as the whirlwinds of time... churn your seas of space,
where is the hurry... to reach the places you are going,
has the matter of some reality... got you on the move,
blindly racing along... just to keep your wheels rolling,

little world, with all of your... courageous perspectives,
your contagious methods of reason... are ever-growing,
yet, behind those cool eyes... the icy truth is in sight,
an intangible sign, from the abstract arena of knowing~

it's a fine line between choosing, or being the chosen,
but luckily, it's a wondrous world... for a crash-landing,
so keep your hopes up high... but keep your head down,
life happens here... despite the chaos of understanding,

but little world... dissatisfaction is your only guarantee,
perhaps it's just another theory... you've been buying,
beyond the paths unknown, beyond the wilds... of being,
lie infinite destinations... but none are reached by trying~

and if ever there was a secret, it's still quite well hidden,
answers are scarce... but questions seem never-ending,
the ruse has been broken, and there's too much to know,
(I would choose to forget it... and continue pretending),

all may be as one... but know, the one is made of many,
and know, little world, you are that one... still resisting,
there's no second guess... beyond the point of no return,
the eternal you... and everything too, are still coexisting~

you can demand a front row seat... to your own demise,
if that's when you plan to put aside... all your crusading,
the loss of time is all it costs... in having to sell the self,
but that which serves purpose... requires no persuading,

wash the writing off the wall... words are to blame for all,
that symbiotic love affair... is pure failure, in the making,
little one, the time is now... to give deception its farewell,
relax and enjoy the voyage... you've always been taking~

wgs/6/14
many is a word

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by saw » June 23rd, 2014, 6:05 pm

our brain is a microcosm of ideas, emotions, good intentions, missteps, hallelujahs...etc. etc.

it's a amusement park ride....thrilling , giddy and often scary as shit

enjoyed the ride
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by creativesoul » June 23rd, 2014, 6:56 pm

this is banging hot-
sizzle pop
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by justwalt » June 24th, 2014, 12:17 am

words seem to be losing their meaning lately,
or I'm losing losing interest in them...
they just don't fit things anymore.

might have to change my signature soon...

many thanks folks,
and peace

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by creativesoul » June 24th, 2014, 12:27 am

X X-ray causes
Minimal assuages
Kisses on the fingers
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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by justwalt » June 24th, 2014, 1:33 am

X X-ray causes
Minimal assuages
Kisses on the fingers
real language!!!!!
Oh you're bad
:P
many is a word

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by creativesoul » June 25th, 2014, 12:51 am

She slept while the cat snuggled againest her thrkbbing calves
The dog watched her back
They fit like random stars
Opening skies
With the capacity to love
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by dadio » June 25th, 2014, 2:09 am

An existential poem if ever i read one. Fine work. 8)

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by justwalt » June 26th, 2014, 9:32 pm

your artwork, I presume... I like...
how large do you paint?

and thank you too hip-dude

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Post by creativesoul » June 26th, 2014, 10:45 pm

Have a big canvas going- the theme - " houses I have lived in" my family- grandmother- cousin and grandfather are also in it-
Yes
I went on a 52 painting spree - - kind of " break on thru to the other side"
Doors opened
But so did my heart
Mostly 18x 20
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by justwalt » June 27th, 2014, 12:52 am

this beach, four feet by five... bang beautiful
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Post by creativesoul » June 27th, 2014, 2:15 am

Picturing myself there! @sometime sion! With $$$$$$$£€♥▶◀▶¥>`¿
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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by creativesoul » July 1st, 2014, 10:58 pm

There sere tears of frustration
A release of the sadness
Joy replaced him
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: mikros kosmos

Post by creativesoul » July 4th, 2014, 5:02 pm

There sere tears of frustration
A release of the sadness
Joy replaced him
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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