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sun dance

Posted: July 16th, 2014, 10:53 am
by creativesoul
the man had been down a few roads- that maybe others had not- when spirits spoke late at night he could hear them- and well- with the women - he had some strange flavors- intercessor blues i guess-the things that happened- in history- in the american genoside of the native american- and the flock- hurriedly looking to get all they can- and the terminal givers- the ones that believe that will never give up- trusting that these ceremonies would fix it- make it right-
and they do=
just not the way you might think-
because prayers get answered - however they do- and that is none of my bussiness- really-
our friend has brain cancer diabetes and all kinds of babies- just got off chemo again- and she is in charge of the kitchen- well - this girl has to pick it up and go help her- really my friend--
and why do we sign up for every task?
dunno
love?
i guess it is like being a 'highlander' NEVER STOP MOVING- so u know you are alive---0 yea

Re: sun dance

Posted: July 16th, 2014, 11:43 pm
by saw
you are a keen storyteller jana.........and it would seem you've lived a life rich with stories

keep 'em commin'

Re: sun dance

Posted: August 1st, 2014, 8:47 am
by creativesoul
awwww- thank you- and i feel honored that you even noticed- really-
i love to tell the stories- makes me smile-
when i was a kid i used to say 'tell me a story'
i like that

Re: sun dance

Posted: August 1st, 2014, 12:42 pm
by whoaisme
really enjoyed this, especially this line:

"because prayers get answered - however they do- and that is none of my bussiness- really"

keep writing hard!

Re: sun dance

Posted: August 10th, 2014, 8:59 pm
by creativesoul
after the dance
the egos return
people start thinking they are somebody
when it is pretty simple
whosssh
everyone lands
the landing gear makes the sound of metal and smells of rubber
and the flight
you didnt even know you were on
lands
i was flying around for days afterwards-
couldnt get all the way back
i like it out there-
and they start talking a whole bunch about stuff
way too much
god my ears were hurting
overdoes of love and healing
and the retreat :mrgreen: