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Image

Posted: July 22nd, 2014, 1:02 pm
by sweetwater
If it begins without me
Please restate the question poem

...

Like tomorrow came and went
Like the likeness of liking tomorrow
As soft moments of doing in the morning are
exposed to the elements of a rising
Emptiness of Poem

As if the character was in question
Of his or hers own existence
And could only live in the context of writing

Everything else seemed empty like a pond of mud
Or a half glass of day-old beer
And
It's lacking in any semblance of inspiration
seemed only intentional
More as inability than inclination

But not as all things that come to pass
Rather inspire the moment or to deflate
What it was I thought I was thinking
in the first place

It's as if a randomized memory yet to be
Was something that could only exist
in the context of writing

All things relatively subjective
As object and objective statement

The image is for yours to imagine

Re: Image

Posted: July 30th, 2014, 12:35 pm
by whoaisme
scared/joyed/excited/bewildered at the notion of "it begins without me." that was a great hook :!:

"No form nor deeds, no rising nor falling"
Prajna Sutra