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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » September 17th, 2014, 11:09 am

the woman had looked from the stars across the seas
to find the treasures with held from societies
for reasons which most of us are painfully aware-
hillbilly internet and anger
love her if you dare
cannot fix her

da kine
watched from the other side
hoping to set it on its axis like the balance of the tides
so was once perfectly imbalanced can return to center
what
puppies and poetry?
room mates and dog shit
it is almost over
circus tents of personalites
tired
less talk please
she drinks the viles of mystical herbal solutions
has not time for the usual pollution

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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » September 17th, 2014, 2:36 pm

although it is 5 in the morng
the phone rings


timid like a bear
bare it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: knarly

Post by Arcadia » September 17th, 2014, 9:32 pm

too much & too less pollinate each other (knarly, tiredly) in your poem, creativesoul!! Gracias for sharing it!!!! :)

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Post by creativesoul » September 18th, 2014, 8:41 am

thank you-i appreciate feed back
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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