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Ruiners

Post by izeveryboyin » September 22nd, 2014, 11:20 am

A million glances
A million little
deaths
each touch
such
exquisite
torment
perfect in
it's
Nihilism
destroying
broken
hearts
But I'm a broken
woman
You're
a broken
man
Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own.
sometimes I just like to breathe.

www.technicolorfraud.blogspot.com

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Re: Ruiners

Post by whoaisme » September 22nd, 2014, 4:50 pm

"Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own."

:mrgreen: :idea: :!:

congrats on a great poem, i loved it!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: Ruiners

Post by WIREMAN » September 22nd, 2014, 6:05 pm

love the form and flow here
csn&y was sayin the same thing in 1970
lets get miserable together my love.....right! :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Ruiners

Post by SadLuckDame » September 23rd, 2014, 8:18 pm

HaHa! It's good!
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: Ruiners

Post by judih » September 23rd, 2014, 11:06 pm

Well, look who's back to offer us a fine spine-tingler!

hi! Hello! Kaylaa!

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Re: Ruiners

Post by Arcadia » September 24th, 2014, 9:21 pm

:lol:... bravo & bienvenida otra vez!!!!!!!! :D

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Re: Ruiners

Post by creativesoul » September 25th, 2014, 10:56 am

damage control
yeah
i get it

nice one
kind of like a razor blade pencil
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Ruiners

Post by revolutionR » September 28th, 2014, 2:26 pm

this poem reminds me of current events in my life
she wanted to record my poetry, but all i have is
recorded threats and insults on my cell phony

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Re: Ruiners

Post by mnaz » September 28th, 2014, 5:23 pm

seems it ain't ever quite what it seems, but it's what we got until, ?
not sure.

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revolutionR
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Re: Ruiners

Post by revolutionR » September 28th, 2014, 6:37 pm

sugar daddy i ain't

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Re: Ruiners

Post by creativesoul » September 28th, 2014, 10:17 pm

i could use a sugar daddy right about now :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Ruiners

Post by revolutionR » September 28th, 2014, 11:44 pm

Gaaa!!! :|

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