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Ruiners
Posted: September 22nd, 2014, 11:20 am
by izeveryboyin
A million glances
A million little
deaths
each touch
such
exquisite
torment
perfect in
it's
Nihilism
destroying
broken
hearts
But I'm a broken
woman
You're
a broken
man
Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own.
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 22nd, 2014, 4:50 pm
by whoaisme
"Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own."
congrats on a great poem, i loved it!
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 22nd, 2014, 6:05 pm
by WIREMAN
love the form and flow here
csn&y was sayin the same thing in 1970
lets get miserable together my love.....right!

Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 23rd, 2014, 8:18 pm
by SadLuckDame
HaHa! It's good!
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 23rd, 2014, 11:06 pm
by judih
Well, look who's back to offer us a fine spine-tingler!
hi! Hello! Kaylaa!
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 9:21 pm
by Arcadia

... bravo & bienvenida otra vez!!!!!!!!

Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 10:56 am
by creativesoul
damage control
yeah
i get it
nice one
kind of like a razor blade pencil
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 28th, 2014, 2:26 pm
by revolutionR
this poem reminds me of current events in my life
she wanted to record my poetry, but all i have is
recorded threats and insults on my cell phony
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 28th, 2014, 5:23 pm
by mnaz
seems it ain't ever quite what it seems, but it's what we got until, ?
not sure.
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 28th, 2014, 6:37 pm
by revolutionR
sugar daddy i ain't
Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 28th, 2014, 10:17 pm
by creativesoul
i could use a sugar daddy right about now

Re: Ruiners
Posted: September 28th, 2014, 11:44 pm
by revolutionR
Gaaa!!!
