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we burned
Posted: September 30th, 2014, 11:40 pm
by the mingo
we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
Re: we burned
Posted: October 1st, 2014, 5:53 pm
by WIREMAN
we jammed through
the night
and the stickyness
of it, was devine
this poem u wrote is awesome mingo .....
Re: we burned
Posted: October 1st, 2014, 10:53 pm
by judih
the mingo wrote:we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
sounds like a gravestone epitaph for a group of action poets
perhaps we can all take a chunk of this
Re: we burned
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 9:53 am
by the mingo
thx folks -
Re: we burned
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 6:53 pm
by mtmynd
el mingo, amigo... this is all needs to be said... and you did it perfectly.
Re: we burned
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 5:51 pm
by Arcadia
yeah, ashes to the wind...!
(it sounds ecological if it´s not doing en masse...
). Gracias, mingo!
Re: we burned
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 9:20 pm
by the mingo
Thx Cec & Veronica -