Down with the leaves

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Doreen Peri
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Re: Down with the leaves

Post by Doreen Peri » October 14th, 2014, 11:16 pm

making good cover for the brave,
a snake in a sunbeam.
Nice phrasing and imagery here!

Getting chilly here, too. I'm sooooo NOT a winter person. But I'll make it through. I'll write or paint my way through.

I also liked how you personified winter and gave him a "cold personality."

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Re: Down with the leaves

Post by revolutionR » October 15th, 2014, 12:19 am

there is a story here buried under those leaves of the fall.

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Re: Down with the leaves

Post by saw » October 15th, 2014, 12:30 pm

the cycle of life...handled with good imagery
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Down with the leaves

Post by 68degrees » October 15th, 2014, 9:24 pm

I'm from the Midwest. We are a bit past our autumn peak but many of the trees are still alive and spewing their colors. They do "sigh"…and now I know I'm not crazy. Other folks hear it too.

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Re: Down with the leaves

Post by Tjflowers80 » October 17th, 2014, 10:00 pm

:( our fall here is almost over. It saddens me to see it go. At least dreams will bring it back to life. Times will reveal the life that's renewed; all seasons they must come and they must go always leaving a memoir in our hearts and souls.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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