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Re: Down with the leaves

Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:16 pm
by Doreen Peri
making good cover for the brave,
a snake in a sunbeam.
Nice phrasing and imagery here!

Getting chilly here, too. I'm sooooo NOT a winter person. But I'll make it through. I'll write or paint my way through.

I also liked how you personified winter and gave him a "cold personality."

Re: Down with the leaves

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:19 am
by revolutionR
there is a story here buried under those leaves of the fall.

Re: Down with the leaves

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:30 pm
by saw
the cycle of life...handled with good imagery

Re: Down with the leaves

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 9:24 pm
by 68degrees
I'm from the Midwest. We are a bit past our autumn peak but many of the trees are still alive and spewing their colors. They do "sigh"…and now I know I'm not crazy. Other folks hear it too.

68degrees

Re: Down with the leaves

Posted: October 17th, 2014, 10:00 pm
by Tjflowers80
:( our fall here is almost over. It saddens me to see it go. At least dreams will bring it back to life. Times will reveal the life that's renewed; all seasons they must come and they must go always leaving a memoir in our hearts and souls.