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Credendum

Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:59 pm
by 68degrees
There is gutted church
in the Upper Peninsula,
near Calumet, near Superior:
no pews are left for prayer,
no altar for the Body;
only stained glass remains
with all its colored language,
all its Latin echoes

Were we there, sweetheart,
on that Sunday morning?
I swear we could still hear
the chorus singing

We laughed but later that evening
you sang to me in the darkness
and your voice was like hearing
water from a fountain; when we loved
I dreamed I was being baptized
again and again

Re: Credendum

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:01 am
by revolutionR
love, the only real baptism....nice piece.

Re: Credendum

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 10:53 am
by 68degrees
Thanks.

And thanks.

This piece is still in work. Appreciate all comments.

Re: Credendum

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 11:27 am
by WIREMAN
real nice piece
keep em coming
my daughters
on leelanau peninsula
near traverse city

Re: Credendum

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:33 pm
by saw
nice pictures

particularly liked :

only stained glass remains
with all its colorful language,
all its Latin echoes

Re: Credendum

Posted: October 15th, 2014, 9:05 pm
by 68degrees
Wireman: Calumet is WAY UP by Copper Harbor. Glad to meet you.

Saw: Thanks for the look.

68degrees