Unused Cemetery

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68degrees
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Unused Cemetery

Post by 68degrees » October 29th, 2014, 7:53 pm

The last sound in
to this uncertain wobble
of earth, even if life
isn't so beautiful,
could be your prayer,
my friend

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whoaisme
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Re: Unused Cemetery

Post by whoaisme » November 4th, 2014, 9:23 pm

you packed so much meaning and heart into only a few lines. wow...well done!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: Unused Cemetery

Post by Doreen Peri » November 5th, 2014, 12:35 pm

I agree with whoaisme.

Such concise writing for an abundance of rich imagery and layers of meaning.

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Re: Unused Cemetery

Post by 68degrees » November 5th, 2014, 5:07 pm

whoaisme:

Thank you. I am in love w/brevity. Sometimes.

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Re: Unused Cemetery

Post by 68degrees » November 5th, 2014, 5:09 pm

Thanks, Doreen. Appreciate it.

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