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Unused Cemetery
Posted: October 29th, 2014, 7:53 pm
by 68degrees
The last sound in
to this uncertain wobble
of earth, even if life
isn't so beautiful,
could be your prayer,
my friend
Re: Unused Cemetery
Posted: November 4th, 2014, 9:23 pm
by whoaisme
you packed so much meaning and heart into only a few lines. wow...well done!
Re: Unused Cemetery
Posted: November 5th, 2014, 12:35 pm
by Doreen Peri
I agree with whoaisme.
Such concise writing for an abundance of rich imagery and layers of meaning.
Re: Unused Cemetery
Posted: November 5th, 2014, 5:07 pm
by 68degrees
whoaisme:
Thank you. I am in love w/brevity. Sometimes.
68degrees
Re: Unused Cemetery
Posted: November 5th, 2014, 5:09 pm
by 68degrees
Thanks, Doreen. Appreciate it.
68degrees