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Unused Cemetery

Posted: October 29th, 2014, 7:53 pm
by 68degrees
The last sound in
to this uncertain wobble
of earth, even if life
isn't so beautiful,
could be your prayer,
my friend

Re: Unused Cemetery

Posted: November 4th, 2014, 9:23 pm
by whoaisme
you packed so much meaning and heart into only a few lines. wow...well done!

Re: Unused Cemetery

Posted: November 5th, 2014, 12:35 pm
by Doreen Peri
I agree with whoaisme.

Such concise writing for an abundance of rich imagery and layers of meaning.

Re: Unused Cemetery

Posted: November 5th, 2014, 5:07 pm
by 68degrees
whoaisme:

Thank you. I am in love w/brevity. Sometimes.

68degrees

Re: Unused Cemetery

Posted: November 5th, 2014, 5:09 pm
by 68degrees
Thanks, Doreen. Appreciate it.

68degrees