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O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: October 31st, 2014, 3:29 am
by the mingo
brewing bugs in the desert
blowing my brain
my best friend's in France
but i'm going to Spain
where the women
don't shave their armpits
but dance across an expanse of stage
where things never gather, hang around, or pile up
i'll watch them from the street
as my dolphins eat fish
and november waits
right around the corner
tinged with darkness
& smiling at the threat of rain
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: October 31st, 2014, 9:22 am
by whoaisme
smiling at the threat of rain!?
DAMMIT MAN
THATS A GREAT POEM!
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: October 31st, 2014, 10:02 am
by the mingo
THX whoaisme -
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: October 31st, 2014, 5:29 pm
by creativesoul
really slick- nice
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: October 31st, 2014, 8:18 pm
by mtmynd
you got the rhythm, you got the beat
you got the words makin' dancin' feet
el mingo... nice and over easy like a polite fried egg.
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: November 1st, 2014, 11:24 am
by WIREMAN
i remember a beautiful european girl at the pool when i was a kid, i was blown away when she lifted her arms....then the hippie daze came and changed all that.....real cool flow going on here
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: November 1st, 2014, 9:40 pm
by the mingo
Thx folks - keep jammin on
Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth
Posted: November 2nd, 2014, 4:20 pm
by saw
you cover a lot of ground in a short space...and it all works